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Enchanted, In a blue chilled sky,
Upon a cloud, a cat did fly,
With two red stripes on back aglow,
Feelers waiving about, so-so.

It stretched out its body, content,
And shined its light down as it went,
For it gave life to darkness chilled,
The gods' agreement, Sun fulfilled.

From down below smiled a cat,
This one black and green, not so fat,
It thanked sun for his great gift,
Of warmth and light to warm it, Earth.

And then on stars what floated in,
A third cat, turquoise, black, and thin,
The others greated marily,
For night was here, said Moon dearly.

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Ok, I know this isn't my best work, far from it, but I did put effort into it. What more do you guys want? :bucktooth:

Anyway, this is a small gift for *WhiteWeasel in order to thank her for how much work she put into my commissions as well as to hopefully cheer her up a bit. It features her three spirits, the Sun, the Earth, and the Moon. So... I hope you like it. :)

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~DavidsWolfGoddess13 Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, very well written :D
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=smartboyathome Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I guess an artist sees more flaws in their work than the audience? ;P
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~DavidsWolfGoddess13 Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Always. XD
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:iconwhiteweasel:
aw I love this, it portrays the three spirits so perfectly, this really did make my day :hug: thank you so much
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=smartboyathome Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. You deserve it. :D
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