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Put your past behind you?Why is it,
when you mess up,
people say,
"Put it behind you"?

The past hurts,
It's who you are,
And at its core,
It's your fate.

Even when
You try to fix it,
It always does
Come back, haunt you.

So just remember,
Once you mess up,
You'll have gained,
A permanent wound.

An Insignificant's FateIf you are confused by any of this, read the artist's comments below.
I couldn't sleep last night,
This has been eating me,
I cannot draw,
so why not write,
This is what I see.
I'm in a hall of mirrors,
Each one a diff'rent path,
I look on through,
See someone new,
A future I can't grasp.
Through one I see a creature,
Small and brown and green,
With purple eyes,
and flexi' tail,
It stares at me and smiles.
Another, stands a man,
The head of programming,
Success is there,
But happiness where?
It seems a stressful man.
A third stands a guy,
Who cannot make ends meet,
People like him,
But none want him,
He's not happy either.
A fourth, security,
Even he could be me,
But its blurry,
And I can't see,
If this even suits me.
And then a change in room,
This one, a mirror circle,
A bunch of guys,
I'm not part of,
I'll never be with them.
A second like the last,
This one full of people,
Their backs are turned,
They don't see me,
A situation earned.
And finally the last,
A mirror blank as

UnseenI arrive to,
A gathering,
Where I know none,
And none know me.
I sit alone,
Invisible,
As they walk by,
Having fun.
I grin at them,
And they ignore,
Figuring that
I'll find others.
Finally one,
Decides to speak,
And I act weird,
And they do leave.
Shyness invades,
And I shrink back,
I feel alone,
I feel alone.

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Smartboy's Site -PLEASE HELP! LARGE FILE!-by =smartboyathome

Designs & Interfaces / Web Interfaces

©2012-2013 =smartboyathome

First off, let me apologize for the large file size. These are live screen captures from my site that I quickly edited together. I understand if no one looks at it/critiques it purely because of the file size.

So this is my site's theme, at least what I've done so far on it. It uses pure CSS3 (which means no images) with the exception of the picture of Kyureki in the bottom left corner. What you see can be seen by also going to my site. This will probably be more useful, but hey people can quickly glance at the image too.

I am not a designer, I am a developer, so this is why I seek critique from actual designers on what to do better with my theme. I know there are flaws with this theme, but I'd like some input on what works and what doesn't before actually going forward. So yeah, please give me feedback! I'd like to know how I could improve this!

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~GacktoSanLover Feb 14, 2012 Student Filmographer

Nice site ^^

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=smartboyathome Feb 14, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thanks, is there anything you could critique?

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~GacktoSanLover Feb 15, 2012 Student Filmographer

yw! ^^ hmm maybe you should use a different color for your fox lying on the ground, that green color is a big distraction

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=smartboyathome Feb 15, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

But... that is how she looks. She's my daemon, so I am trying to incorporate her into the site.

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~GacktoSanLover Feb 15, 2012 Student Filmographer

haha okay, don't be mad, I was just trying to help!

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=smartboyathome Feb 15, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

I'm not mad. :3

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~GacktoSanLover Feb 15, 2012 Student Filmographer

okay

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*cookienoe Feb 13, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

beautiful site, of course cute as well thanks to Kyureki :>

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=smartboyathome Feb 14, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Thanks. I thought it was just okay.

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*cookienoe Feb 16, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

the coloring is nice, i've always found brown to look quite nice on a web page :>

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